ED WILES - JURY AWARD WINNER
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"Thanks to everyone who voted for me to scrape me into the top ten and give me a chance and an equal footing with those with far more friends than me. Thank you too to the panel for spotting my undoubted brilliance!"
- Ed Wiles
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Ed's addendum to 1-pager:
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As soon as I entered the idea I started seeing ways of improving it. For instance, the person who saves my main character, Peter Downs, when he tries to save his suicidal client at the beginning should in fact be the client's daughter - the girl with whom he will eventually fall in love.
Also, I quickly realised that the angelic ex-clients blocking Peter from joining them should not all have committed suicide. It will be better if Peter blocked payment for a variety of reasons - and it is disproving these reasons (that he previously worked so hard to prove) that gives him a series of challenges.
I'm sure when I get into the story I'll see more and more nifty ideas - but that's the beauty and fun of writing a script, right?
Read Ed's Q&A with MMF >here<
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